I’m almost done with the larger revisions related to M.L.’s suggestions, and it’s actually turning out a lot easier than I was making it *laugh*

I was looking at possibly adding or modifying several scenes, and it turns out that a paragraph here and a line there will actually get across what I left out.  If I’d had time before the deadline, I might have even caught some of it myself, but there’s a reason I have M.L. look over all these — I always miss a few things, and she always catches them.

Next step is fleshing out some of the scenes in the last third that I didn’t have as much time to read through and tweak before posting it in the contest.  Then, it will be adding bits of color to the world throughout.

After that, I’ll go into my full first-pass edit I usually do before sending a story out to first readers, let alone posting it.