Lowborn and Amber

Made an initial tweaking sweep through Lowborn, and ran it through the grammar check as well.  Uploaded it a little while ago for my first reader on that story, so we’ll see what she has to say before going through another pass on that one.

Wrote a little more on Amber.  Initially, this was going to be just a pure smut story, but it’s changing in my head a little as I write it.  The characters were just feeling too two-dimensional, and they were quietly protesting that by developing personalities.  A direct result of that is that the whole direction of the tale has changed.

It’s still going to be smut, and very much a college sex tale, but it just doesn’t end the same way any longer.  Amber and Rachel just won’t stand to be completely generic college sluts, I guess *laugh*

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