Made an initial tweaking sweep through Lowborn, and ran it through the grammar check as well. Uploaded it a little while ago for my first reader on that story, so we’ll see what she has to say before going through another pass on that one.
Wrote a little more on Amber. Initially, this was going to be just a pure smut story, but it’s changing in my head a little as I write it. The characters were just feeling too two-dimensional, and they were quietly protesting that by developing personalities. A direct result of that is that the whole direction of the tale has changed.
It’s still going to be smut, and very much a college sex tale, but it just doesn’t end the same way any longer. Amber and Rachel just won’t stand to be completely generic college sluts, I guess *laugh*