I’m almost done with the larger revisions related to M.L.’s suggestions, and it’s actually turning out a lot easier than I was making it *laugh*<\/p>\n
I was looking at possibly adding or modifying several scenes, and it turns out that a paragraph here and a line there will actually get across what I left out.\u00a0 If I’d had time before the deadline, I might have even caught some of it myself, but there’s a reason I have M.L. look over all these — I always miss a few things, and she always catches them.<\/p>\n
Next step is fleshing out some of the scenes in the last third that I didn’t have as much time to read through and tweak before posting it in the contest.\u00a0 Then, it will be adding bits of color to the world throughout.<\/p>\n
After that, I’ll go into my full first-pass edit I usually do before sending a story out to first readers, let alone posting it.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"
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