{"id":2122,"date":"2012-07-30T00:17:14","date_gmt":"2012-07-30T04:17:14","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/?p=2122"},"modified":"2012-07-30T00:17:14","modified_gmt":"2012-07-30T04:17:14","slug":"beauty-edit-rolling-along","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/archives\/2122","title":{"rendered":"Beauty edit rolling along"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Already addressed a couple of the more &#8220;duh&#8221; passages, which included at least one continuity error and one that gave the appearance of same.\u00a0 Fixed a line of dialogue that was totally out of sync with someone having a doctor&#8217;s education.\u00a0 Then, I started delving into the things that need to be in there to round out Dara&#8217;s character and her motivation.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ll probably deal with the typos and other grammar oddities as I go, then stomp the last of them in the first-pass edit of this draft.<\/p>\n<p>My goal is to have this draft done before next weekend, then get it off to M.L. for her to review the changes.\u00a0 Final tweaks should probably only take a day or two, at which point I&#8217;ll do the nuts-n-bolts clean-up, and send it off to Roust to sweep up anything I missed.<\/p>\n<p>Then, I&#8217;ll finally be ready to post it at SOL and update the version at Lit.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Already addressed a couple of the more &#8220;duh&#8221; passages, which included at least one continuity error and one that gave the appearance of same.\u00a0 Fixed a line of dialogue that was totally out of sync with someone having a doctor&#8217;s education.\u00a0 Then, I started delving into the things that need to be in there to [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":118,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":[],"categories":[6],"tags":[13],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2122"}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/118"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=2122"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2122\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":2123,"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2122\/revisions\/2123"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=2122"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=2122"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=2122"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}