{"id":1812,"date":"2011-10-04T00:08:56","date_gmt":"2011-10-04T04:08:56","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/?p=1812"},"modified":"2011-10-04T00:08:56","modified_gmt":"2011-10-04T04:08:56","slug":"editing-started-on-harvest","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/archives\/1812","title":{"rendered":"Editing started on Harvest"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Just finished my first cold read of Barren Harvest.\u00a0 Made a few wording changes and added some scenery spice, but I&#8217;m otherwise happy with it.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ll do the nuts-n-bolts first pass edit in a little while, then get it off to Roust.\u00a0 Since it&#8217;s been a while since I&#8217;ve mentioned it, this is the next in the Arts Ardane series, as well as a Halloween story that gives more details about the Harvest Festival in Danica&#8217;s world.<\/p>\n<p>After that, I&#8217;m going to get back to Flesh.\u00a0 I&#8217;ve been mulling it over, and I might just change it up a little.\u00a0 I hit a snag last night where I was having trouble dealing with how the characters would react &#8212; as well as feeling as if the story was dragging.\u00a0 There are a couple of neat scenes that I really like, but I&#8217;m having trouble getting them to flow with the overall story.\u00a0 I may just have to scrap them and save them for another tale.<\/p>\n<p>Just have to see what happens.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Just finished my first cold read of Barren Harvest.\u00a0 Made a few wording changes and added some scenery spice, but I&#8217;m otherwise happy with it. I&#8217;ll do the nuts-n-bolts first pass edit in a little while, then get it off to Roust.\u00a0 Since it&#8217;s been a while since I&#8217;ve mentioned it, this is the next [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":118,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":[],"categories":[4],"tags":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1812"}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/118"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=1812"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1812\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1813,"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1812\/revisions\/1813"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1812"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=1812"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=1812"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}