{"id":1799,"date":"2011-09-19T23:36:28","date_gmt":"2011-09-20T03:36:28","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/?p=1799"},"modified":"2011-09-19T23:36:28","modified_gmt":"2011-09-20T03:36:28","slug":"a-little-tweaking","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/archives\/1799","title":{"rendered":"A little tweaking"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>As I nearly finished my first draft of Harvest, I went back through and read it from start to finish.\u00a0 The ending was feeling a little weak to me, and I ended up going with a hybrid of my original idea ( which I felt was a bit too dark for general readership in the Halloween contest, and what had kept me from finishing it ) and my new, lighter finale to the story.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;m working on that transition now.\u00a0 Other than a few odds and ends, I&#8217;m more or less replacing one scene with another earlier in the story, and then writing the new ending ( which is only modified a little )<\/p>\n<p>Mulling over that Wood tale and the one I&#8217;ve dubbed &#8220;Flesh&#8221; as well.\u00a0 As always, a little getting done on Lowborn and SOTM here and there as well.\u00a0 It&#8217;s sort of a good thing I didn&#8217;t crack down on Lowborn, because as slowly as things are getting released at Lit now, it would have defeated my design of rapidly releasing those chapters at a rate of around two a week.<\/p>\n<p>Hoping things improve after the Halloween contest.<\/p>\n<p>Back to Harvest.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>As I nearly finished my first draft of Harvest, I went back through and read it from start to finish.\u00a0 The ending was feeling a little weak to me, and I ended up going with a hybrid of my original idea ( which I felt was a bit too dark for general readership in the [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":118,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":[],"categories":[4],"tags":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1799"}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/118"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=1799"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1799\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1800,"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1799\/revisions\/1800"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1799"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=1799"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=1799"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}