{"id":1318,"date":"2010-08-16T23:05:56","date_gmt":"2010-08-17T03:05:56","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/?p=1318"},"modified":"2010-08-16T23:05:56","modified_gmt":"2010-08-17T03:05:56","slug":"tweakin-an-musin","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/archives\/1318","title":{"rendered":"Tweakin&#8217; an&#8217; Musin&#8217;"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Did a lot of musing on both SOTM and Lowborn today.\u00a0 I&#8217;m itching to write on both of them.\u00a0 The plan is to dive back into SOTM after I finish this little break I&#8217;m on right now.<\/p>\n<p>What I&#8217;m taking a break from is tweaking both Kindred and Ride.\u00a0 Kindred was just getting some bits of imagery that popped in my head as I was drifting off to sleep last night.\u00a0 It&#8217;s still technically in the simmering phase before the cold read.<\/p>\n<p>Ride needed <em>something<\/em>.\u00a0 The flow was off in one spot &#8212; too jumpy.\u00a0 I also had a bit of imagery that I wanted to put in there that gave a better indication of what was happening.\u00a0 Hard to explain without giving away the story.\u00a0 I also changed the ending, which was too abrupt.\u00a0 That was the one thing I wasn&#8217;t really happy with, and I&#8217;m much pleased with the change.<\/p>\n<p>Okay, off to eat and chill for a while.\u00a0 If I get anything major done on SOTM, I&#8217;ll pop back in and drop a line.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Did a lot of musing on both SOTM and Lowborn today.\u00a0 I&#8217;m itching to write on both of them.\u00a0 The plan is to dive back into SOTM after I finish this little break I&#8217;m on right now. What I&#8217;m taking a break from is tweaking both Kindred and Ride.\u00a0 Kindred was just getting some bits [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":118,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":[],"categories":[4,6],"tags":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1318"}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/118"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=1318"}],"version-history":[{"count":2,"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1318\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1321,"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1318\/revisions\/1321"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1318"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=1318"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/darkniciad.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=1318"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}