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Editing underway

I just did my first pass through “Friend of the Wood”.  Tweaked a few things and added a couple of lines that I’d forgotten ( heralding back to earlier scenes in the story ).  The main thing I did was change the ending, though.

When I read it “cold”, it felt too quick to me.  I ended up condensing it and alluding that something was going to happen in the future, rather than having it actually happen in the story.  It feels much more natural now.

Going to give it a couple of hours, then go back and tweak the scenery a little in a few scenes.  I have a habit of centering so much on my characters that I forget about the world around them.  I end up having to come back in and build set pieces around them most of the time :p

I actually have an idea for another story in the series — a short one featuring Melinda and Glen.  It was inspired by the current contest at Lushstories ( where I post stories under my RR name ) that fits perfectly with those two.  If I write it, it will actually be a jump backwards in time from the “now” of Friend of the Wood — probably falling between it and Beauty of the Wood.

It may even be exclusive to Lush.  It’s going to be a shorter tale such as those that do well there, and more of a moment in the life than the rest of the stories in the series.  If I decide to do that, I’ll probably release an Ebook for it here on my website shortly after publishing at Lush for people who only read on the other sites.

Besides that, there’s always been another story at the edges of Friend of the Wood.  I ended up cutting a character out ( other than a brief mention ) and saving what he was all about in a notes file.  If I decide to go through with that one, it will begin at the same time as Friend of the Wood, and the ending will be shortly thereafter.

This one would end up as a story on my “Shorts” page.  It’s a little more than a moment in the life, but still not quite on par with the depth of most of the stories in the series.  Something important is going to happen in the tale if I decide to run with the idea.

It will be like the rest of the stories in the series in that there will be no need to read it to understand later stories, though.  The whole series is designed to be stand-alone tales that are enhanced by reading what’s come before.

Going to take a break for a few, then get back to editing.

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And the story is…

Now that I’m down to the last scene and happy with what’s come before ( though there’s still the editing process to go ) I finally feel safe revealing what I’ve been working on for the Summer Lovin’ contest at Lit.

The next story in the Magic of the Wood series will be “Friend of the Wood” and features Terra, who is Dan and Brooke’s daughter.  She has a twin sister named Ella and a younger brother named Dale who will also have supporting roles.

I’d originally planned to use these characters for Earth Day this year, but the idea I had just wouldn’t come together.  The characters are the same other than a couple of quirks, and there’s a general theme that carried over, but pretty much everything else about the summer version of the story is different.

Like I said at the beginning, I’m working on the final scene of the story now.  That means that I’ll have plenty of time to pass it through Mistress Lynn ( who has first-read most of the series for me ) if she has time, and get it to Roust for final editing before posting.  There’s even a chance I’ll be able to do all that and still have it ready for posting during the first week of the contest!  W00T!

I will probably aim for Thursday night rather than the 20th start date.  I always have a lot better luck with stories that post just before the weekend than at any other time.

That’s all for now.  Just wanted to reveal it, since I’ve been hinting around the edges of it for a while now.  I’ve had so many stories in this series sputter out on me that I didn’t want to tease another that never materialized.

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Chapter 10 of Lowborn is LIVE!

The final chapter of Lowborn is live at Literotica!

Lowborn Ch. 10 on Lit

I’ll link the SOL chapter here as soon as I see it post.

Hope everyone enjoyed the story!  Don’t forget to vote and comment on the site of your choice.  Votes, favorites, and public comments are great for lifting the visibility of a story, so you can share the love and get me more feedback by adding your own 🙂

Only vote once, though.  1 story ( or chapter ), 1 vote!  Play fair.  Multi-voting doesn’t help anyone, because they all just get swept away by Lit’s invalid vote sweeper.

And, it’s live at SOL as well.

Lowborn Ch. 10 on SOL

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Final chapter of Lowborn

The final chapter of Lowborn was just pre-approved for tomorrow.  At least Lit waited until the end before the posting schedule got too muddied up :p

So, it should be available some time shortly after midnight at Lit.  I’ll put it in the queue at the normal time tonight on SOL, so it should be up at around 8 am there.  I may do some research on when the latest time Laz is posting new stories in a day is, though.  If it’s even close to that midnight point, I’ll put it in the queue earlier to get closer to a simultaneous release.

Lots of new stories added to the download section in Kindle .prc and RTF format recently.  Check it out for a sultry tale or two on the go.

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