Category Archives: Darkniciad

Yikes! Too many days.

Didn’t realize it had been so long since I’d updated anything.  Quite frankly, one person outside the triad of ultimate ego who decided to attack my win in the Earth Day contest was bothering me more than I realized.  Those three numbskulls I roll my eyes at, but when someone with some reputability decided to, it bothered me.

Once I realized that it was actually getting under my skin, I went straight to the source and found out that the accusation was completely unfounded.  Problem solved.

Unfortunately, as soon as I started reading through what I’ve been writing lately, pretty much everything is off.  So far, the only one that I even know what is wrong with it is Lowborn *laugh*  The others I’m still musing on how to tweak them back into something I’m happy with.

As to Lowborn, the way I was writing the beginning of this chapter just didn’t feel realistic — even for fantasy.  The situation that I’d put Mind and his companions in was simply one that wasn’t anything you could realistically get out of with the resources available.  Oh, I’d written something, but it just felt contrived, and even dull.

I’m changing the flash point to something more immediate, which will result in a much faster paced scene.  It will also let me utilize a character in the scene in a way that I need to bring back to the forefront of the story, as it’s critical to the ending.

It’s always something with me, huh?  It’s just a lot harder to get over these little roadbumps than it used to be.  I don’t have my babydoll here to pick me up when I emotionally fall down any more, so I’ve got to drag my carcass up off the ground myself.

I always get there, but it certainly takes a lot longer to find my feet.

If I don’t get into that rewrite of Lowborn tonight, it will most likely be at some point tomorrow — provided work doesn’t go crazy with long hours again.

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Back to work

I wrote a bit on Lowborn last night/today, some on a story in my third pen name, and did some reading/editing on other stuff I haven’t posted yet.

Also working on another obscure game for a Let’s Play, again by Taito, called “Dungeon Magic” for the NES.  Hard as hell.  I remember it gave me fits when I first played it *laugh*

Probably jump back to Lowborn after I have a bite to eat, although I’m seriously considering getting at least my story listings and covers online.  I’m really slacking on getting the website back up and running.

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Lowborn and A Royal Sacrifice

I’m going to start this one off by saying that the long delayed end of the “A Royal Sacrifice” chain is out.

A Royal Sacrifice Ch. 23

A beautiful end to a wonderful story. Some of the chapters are missing, as one of the authors has left Lit, but give it a read if you missed this series.

I really liked Guy’s character, and I may very well port him into my world at some point.

As to me, I got back on track and writing.  It seems that reading was the spark I needed this time.  I read part of the first chapter of the new Feist novel, and it lit a fire under me.  I’m itching to get back to the book, but I’m not going to miss the chance to write while I’m feeling it, either.  A Feist book almost never lasts more than 24 hours before I finish it.

I finished the edit on Lowborn 05 and got back to work on 06.  I’m leading up to the penultimate conflict, so we’re nearing the point where this one will actually see the light of day at last.

Musing SOTM 17 as well.  I’m right at the transition into a battle, followed by something quite important to the continuing journey.

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Amber off for editing

Finally decided that there just wasn’t any better ending for Amber, so it’s off for editing.  That will probably put it in the queue at Lit and SOL within a couple of days.

Meanwhile, working on Lowborn and SOTM 17.  Today was the obligatory day of vacation rest.  Tomorrow is the heavy lifting of that home clean-up project.  The rest of the week should leave me free to write and rested enough to do so.

I’m guessing that the new LST3K will come out at midnight.  I’ll make a new post if it does.  Everybody read, vote, and comment on this one!  Make the badges of shame I’m having to wear on my Lit Favorites page worth the nightmare!

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Finally got some rest

Like the title says, I finally got some decent sleep.  I put a brand new LST3K in the queue last night.  Keep your eyes peeled for LST3K Ep. 11: Earth Duh some time next week, I should imagine.

Today will probably be a mixture of writing on SOTM 17 ( what I was doing when I paused to take a break and write this blog entry ) and editing Lowborn 5 in response to the first read.  May work a little more on Ch. 06 of Lowborn as well.

I have a project that I need to work on during my vacation next week, but I hope to get quite a bit of writing done as well.  I’d really like to finish Lowborn and have it ready to release soon.  It will be at least seven chapters, because the major resolution of the tale absolutely isn’t going to happen in the one I’m writing now.  At best, I’ll make it through the penultimate action leading up to that.

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