I’ll just update with the one progress line, for now, as the others are still just under the bar to crank them up a notch.
Sections of Book I passed through editor: 11/64 (17%)
I’m in the process of re-thinking Chapter 4. My brain is still keyed in to the longer chapters from Book I, somewhat. That left four feeling a little too “day in the life”, with not quite enough action (sexual or otherwise). I’m shunting some stuff off into Ch. 5, and putting more detail into something I just gave some mentions in Ch. 4. Once I get everything rearranged, and moved around, I should be jumping directly into a 5+ on chapters complete listing, for Book II.
I can tell you one thing, for certain. There won’t be anywhere near as much sex in Book II. Without Zoraster’s meddling, Danica has a lot more of a handle on herself.
She’s still a horny lass, however, and it is for erotica sites, so the sex will be there ~_^ It’s just not going to be as non-stop, as in Book I, and there will only be some hot and heavy suggestion, in some chapters.
Quite a few of my readers will probably be happy to hear that. For everyone else, I’ll make sure the sex scenes are well worth the wait, when they happen. The build up of tension, from the frequent suggestive themes, should make the romps between the sheets all the more explosive, too =)