Of course, I’m never really ‘finished’ editing, but I’ve made the additions and corrections to the unpublished chapters that I had set a goal to make.  I wrote one more scene in Ch. 16 as well.  I’m going to mull over how to make the next transition, because I’m going to gloss over some time in this chapter.  There are a lot of things that the girls ( and Zoraster ) need to do, and it all can’t happen in a day 😉

In the meantime, I think I’m going to read back through Lowborn and get rolling on chapter 5.