Part five is available, and part six is submitted.  I’ve made a lot more effort to apply feedback from Lit in the editing of part six, and I hope those who are reading the story will notice the improvement as each part is released.

I’ve also made a few changes to the Danica Prelude on my short stories page, adding some more vivid descriptions of characters to help flesh them out.  I decided to also submit this one to Lit, and it should go live shortly after part six.

I’m pleased to see my ratings continue to rise, and hope to see those which are missing H’s acquire them soon.  I’m curious as to how high Thakkorias can rise in the rankings as well.  A couple more fives could put it near the top five of Sci-Fi/Fantasy and near the top ten overall.

I’ll probably be releasing a new map soon on the maps page, because part six of the story has a scene taking place in a new area which is not yet depicted in map form.