The more I worked with rewriting the original story, the less right it felt. I was writing it for Valentines, and it was just too romance oriented to work. So, I’ve started over on a blank page.
That’s not to say that some of the scenes I’ve already written can’t be used. Odds are that more than one of them will make it in. I just needed to truly start from scratch and see where the story goes with the Earth Day angle as the primary focus.
Feel free to continue chiming in on the previous post.