Did a lot of musing on both SOTM and Lowborn today.  I’m itching to write on both of them.  The plan is to dive back into SOTM after I finish this little break I’m on right now.

What I’m taking a break from is tweaking both Kindred and Ride.  Kindred was just getting some bits of imagery that popped in my head as I was drifting off to sleep last night.  It’s still technically in the simmering phase before the cold read.

Ride needed something.  The flow was off in one spot — too jumpy.  I also had a bit of imagery that I wanted to put in there that gave a better indication of what was happening.  Hard to explain without giving away the story.  I also changed the ending, which was too abrupt.  That was the one thing I wasn’t really happy with, and I’m much pleased with the change.

Okay, off to eat and chill for a while.  If I get anything major done on SOTM, I’ll pop back in and drop a line.