Got a little more done on Lowborn tonight.  I’ve got a bit of a tricky transition to deal with, and I’m too tired to figure it out *laugh*  If it keeps being a pain, I may just skip it for the moment and move on to the next scene in order to not bog down again.

That might even provide some signposts for the transition.  I’m more or less skipping over a lot of dialogue and summing it up in the following scene, to move the story along a little faster.  Just need a good place for a scene break that sets up what the conversation is about.

Peeked at SOTM 17 a bit, and I’m still not sure what’s missing there.  I’ll give it a bit, and then look at it again.  It’s more or less some important character development, leading into some action, leading into some sex — all of which is going to add some heavy emotional impact to the scenes leading up to the conclusion of this book of Danica’s story.

It was so much easier writing Danica, when I didn’t know all that I do now, and could just find ways to connect the sex and some interesting locales/situations *laugh*  I think the deeper plot will be worth the effort and time put into it when it finally comes out, though.

Okay, I’m off to bed.  Still crossing my fingers that I’ll manage to get out early enough one day this week to go catch Iron Man.  Today looked promising, and then everything went to hell :p